Poems
are kites.
We wait for the wind
We wait for the wind
to be right and delight to bring
them out to fly and display, and we
play like children, releasing our words into
the air. Sometimes they struggle to lift off the ground,
and we run dragging them behind us. Stopping
the air. Sometimes they struggle to lift off the ground,
and we run dragging them behind us. Stopping
and starting until the wind shifts and it catches.
It stretches our muse like a taut string,
a connection from our common
a connection from our common
grounding. High and higher
still, bounding; seeking
altitudes that defy
altitudes that defy
logic, and find-
ing attitudes
that mimic
yours.
An
An
expres-
sion,
sion,
airborne
and
soaring.
Bringing
Bringing
delight to
others
who
find
find
kite
flight
fascin-
ating.
Release
Release
your
words
into the
wind.
Poems
Poems
are kites.
Walt - I did comment on Facebook, saying it again. This is a beautiful picture poem, I absolutely love this.
ReplyDeleteThanks Deep. I just saw the Facebook post. I enjoy the visual aspect of poetry. Glad you like it.
ReplyDeleteLove this one Walt! It brings a smile -- even before the reading. :-) PSC
ReplyDeleteYou captured the process so beautifully.
ReplyDeleteThanks Pam, Shannon. Putting our work out there is like flying a kite. It's just us and the "wind" and we fly, but others watch from a distance and appreciate the beauty of it.
ReplyDeleteoutstanding shape.
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ReplyDeleteyour kite poem is cool.
Happy Rally.
a poem and an illustration all in one - how clever.
ReplyDeletevery nicely done and very creative with the shape. Very cool
ReplyDeletemy thursday post was here
http://blackswanpoetry.wordpress.com/2011/04/01/poem-standing-here/
well i'm fascinated that i even got to read this poem. the layout is wonderful, of course, but the way it lends itself to the flow of the words is so flowing... thank you. ;) -robin
ReplyDeleteBeautifully expressed and I love the kite shape. Thanks for sharing.
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Wow..this is really creative, i love the shape you created...the words are so expressive...
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thanks for stopping by my page, i read your poems on poetic asides
excellent work!
ReplyDeleteI love this metaphor.
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What fun... nicely job of illustration.
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Blessings…
appreciated your contribution on week 42 and week 43.
You Rock!
Love your poetry.
the Perfect Poet Award for you, Thanks for the support!
Oh my, that was beautifully wrought!
ReplyDeleteThis is incredible. Your blog is wonderful! You have an original voice.
ReplyDeleteLove this blog and especially the way you did this poem. Amazing!
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