Saturday, June 4, 2011

THE BLUSH OF SPRING

Her cheeks flush;
the crimson spreading
to her heart
and her lips.
A young man’s fancy turns with
the blush of her cheek.

7 comments:

  1. Very romantic I love the line "the crimson spreading to her heart"

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  2. "a young's man's fancy"...wonderful description

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  3. superb.

    enjoyed the compactness, only a few lines, a complete piece.

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  4. Succinct and superb! This is what was in mind when the phrase "short and sweet" was first coined.

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  5. crimson spreading to her heart is beautiful.

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  6. Love the use of colors in your poem! Descriptive and romantic.

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